Very simple but interesting approach. I’m kind of fascinated with your choices on this piece as it presents a very different experience— one of reflection and quiet absorption of the story and the characters. The additions that you’ve made bring polish, and the sounds definitely pull the viewer in more. I don’t know that it’s viable as a game, but I do think it is venturing into something unique and altogether different— More like an experience, or an immersive art piece rather than gameplay which may or may not have been your goal. If you were aiming for more gameplay, I'd suggest more opportunities for player interaction. At any rate, this piece gives me room for thought, so congrats on a job done!