Wow thanks playing and for the feedback!!
For the university project, most of the marks were directed towards the environment (Bonus marks for some coded functionality, like the dialogue system and the short story). I just wanted a reason for players to move around the environment and attach areas to something other then it's visuals (such as the characters).
The strange glitching of the character is the result of the free player character controller that I acquired from the Unity Asset Store. For all the bugs to be ironed out I will need to create a whole new player character, but it is something that I want to do eventually.
NPCs would be awesome, even if they were just static, I might add them in the future!
I might source some music! Something soft and not to distracting from the visuals!
Thanks for the feedback again! And the video is very insightful and useful!
Cheers!