Okay, I'm getting a lot of early Breeding Season vibes from this game. I like that feel and I like what you're going for, but there's a lot missing in this game. There is no goal, there is no feeling of progression when obtaining some useful item, there's nothing to grind for, the animations are super clunky, and the dialogue could use a few revisions to get a more natural feeling to the exchange. Furtherto, some interactions just don't make sense (like orgasming from Berate or Talk options or your mother saying that she won't have sex with you whenever you interact with her). I understand that this is an extremely early build and I understand that these are probably points that will be touched on eventually, but I'm just calling it as I see it. Criticisms aside, I can see this game coming together fantastically if you can get either a team together to bring this concept into an actual game or manage to accumulate enough funding, experience, and drive to develop this thing a bit faster yourself (although from my experience with alpha stage porn games on crowd funding sites, they don't go very smoothly unless the developer uses some of the funds to hire other people to help guide the process without some of the nastier bumps and hurdles. Games are business and that sometimes just means investment and risk). Also, there's a femboy option. That automatically puts you on my watchlist. It also lets me link you in my Reddit page where I've been accumulating games that feature femboy options, so hopefully that will get you at least one or two more people dropping in to take a look. Keep on it! I hope it lives up to its potential.
Thanks for the feedback SilverSliver! A lot of what you pointed out is being addressed as we go, and you are exactly right, I can only go so fast.
We have a writer on board now, her writing will be going in soon and that will add some life to it all.
I will have a look at Breeding Season, I don't know the name so I must have missed it.
I love making it, so I won't be stopping anytime soon. Going at bit slow right now, because COVID is finally having a direct impact on the household.
Thanks again, jump in the discord if you ever want to get in touch!
I'm sorry to hear about your situation with Covid. I hope you make it through it safe and sound. Although it is reassuring to hear that you've already taken steps to accelerate the development process on this game. Oh, and about Breeding Season, there is a lot of bad blood between the devs and a lot of drama therein. Not a super great example of how most games developed in teams reach completion cause it fell apart before they had a chance to put a lot of stuff in that they intended to, but it's still a pretty cool game with some great examples of what to avoid while recruiting people if you feel inclined to look into the fallout between the devs. Thank you for your response, I hope to check back in with this game in the near future and offer a refreshed review after stuff gets added in :)