Hello! I really enjoyed your demo. I look forward to seeing more! When I have some extra money, I want to back the game, but I also wanted to make you an offer. There were some issues with repeating dialogue lines, and once with a picture next to the dialogue box being doubled, as well as some grammar and spelling issues. I can fix the spelling and grammar errors for you if you like! I've done it for a few other games and it can really help make a better impression. If not, that's okay! You can reach me by email at bellannmae@gmail.com
I also plan to write about the demo in my gaming blog, so I hope that helps as well! Take care :)