Wow, this seems like a really intense experience! This might be just me but I'd like to see some more structure for the interrogation part. I don't think I'm a good enough LARPer to create a really good scene otherwise. But very cool concept, you chose a topic that should be explored more in history. Plus I really like the 'Afterward' section, I think it's important to debrief after an experience like that. You must have a lot of experience in this genre!