oh yeah, that part will stay. The writing and art is just inferior. I think once I got going and actually realized people were invested in this, it sorta empowered me to do it better and things started to come together. I'm very much amateur. While i have my own motivations to complete this project regardless, I'm still very codependent with my audience because I'm just so new at this. So a lot of the time I'm like the guy on stage feeding off the energy of the crowd. That effects me rather than having my own internal fire regardless of the audience. But yeah, as that grew, i think I started to take more risks. Then I got a couple buddies that I love to death to have my back on this, bounce ideas off, and just help me polish or create things that enhanced the story and it sorta took off. I wanna apply that energy to the beginning tho--that quality, i guess