First, the negatives: I didn't really like the art style. MC and Jimmy, in particular, looked misproportioned. I prefer medium- to small-breasted women, but the cast seems to be dominated by big- to huge-breasted women. There's a lot of grinding, and fishing is slow and carpal tunnel syndrome inducing. A minor point: "Yes" and "No" seem like an odd choice of signs to give Evie. Is there a reason she can't just nod or shake her head? That said, I found the plot interesting and the relationship progression well done to such an extent that I came back and paid more than the suggested amount for the game. Keep up the good work!
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Sounds more like personal preference rather than negatives. People like the art, Some people hate it. People like big breast, some people don't. People like the grinding, some people don't. Also the "yes" and "no" thing, again personal preference. I would say it would be nice to have some balance between small breasts and big breasts though that would be nice.