Very interesting, short, and overall pretty good!
Feedback:
1.) PLS FIX THE HITBOXES OMG - lol so the teenager was practically impossible to get past and kept on dying cheap deaths
2.) Fix the music - It kept on starting over and over but not stopping. This was veri unpleasant (also credit music)
3.) Keep on doing what you're doing!!! - Every game you are further improving, and it's really cool to join you on your adventure.