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I've spent the last week going over the game and its great. Love the art, love the plot, love the puzzle. So far I've gotten 7 of the 8 endings (True Ending, Bittersweet, Gutless, Violent, Starface, Beautiful End, Dead End). I can't seem to figure out the last one, I'm assuming based on the choices it'll be based on Jon or Frank? If anyone knows how to get that last one, let me know!

The game is great and well-worth the money for the time and enjoyment. The puzzles are fun (and I really like the new "pick the most relevant clues" mini-game). The characters are all fairly interesting, and honestly even the side characters come off as endearing. Timmy and Chuck were great. All the characters feel distinct and developed by the end. The art and setting is fantastic.


If I had to give one piece of constructive criticism for future games, it would be to add a bit more variety to the routes/plot. It worked in the first game, because that game was focused more on solving the puzzles and this game has opened up a lot more (which is great!).

Some examples of where this game could've had some deviation (again I am missing one ending so I apologize if I accidentally mention it):

  • Depending on early choices, an alternate victim instead of Timmy (i.e. Chuck or Tad). Something that starts a big deviation early on;
  • A "bad end" where Adam ends up kind of following River's trajectory, taking drugs, etc maybe with Timmy and meets the same fate as River;
  • Instead of getting Starface'd if you fail to do well with Evander, if you connect with the Johns they kidnap you  in the bathroom and you have a separate segment where you are captured and have to escape. Perhaps an option where you help Jon and he turns on the others to help you;
  • A Chuck route where you accept the city life and maybe continue being a pornstar (a "good end" that isn't perfect);
  • Some more and/or different scene options for the porn sets. Like instead of the first time you "perform" always being the Jons, different characters show up depending on earlier actions; and
  • A route where you play your cards right and they do offer you to join with different outcomes if you join or not.
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Yeah this would have made the game so much better and perhaps given us a bit more smut? :) But also what you describe would probably increase the amount of work by a significant factor. Even so, I love the art, the writing is VERY good, so if they considered doing an expansion with more routes I think people would buy it.

Haha LMA has always been more focused on the horror/thriller aspect, but it is an erotic thriller so I don't think more smut would hurt. Heh! I've gotten sooo many requests for a scene with Abzi in some way. But I'm torn, as Mitsatso from AMAP, stated quite truly that no matter what I did/wrote, is there any way for Abzi to really live up to expectations? It's almost better to leave it to the imagination. =)

Anyways Nymrod, thank you for the feedback! The initial plan was to have Adam's behavior (mostly how he speaks) change depending on the choices you make. So he could get more sarcastic or "mean". Which would open up more situations to him, that wouldn't be available if he had stayed so "pure".  But due to complexity, I had to curtail that. 

But next time, I also really like that idea. Adam(2) is a great character in that I think I was able to write him "blankly" enough, but still give him enough character. However, I'd agree in that it'd be nice if players had more control in his actions. For example, perhaps users could date other characters aside from Evander. etc.

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Aha so that's why there is a Purity stat that seems to affect nothing?:)

As for the smut, I always felt that well written text is far more important than multiple pics (which I guess goes against the visual novel idea). And you guys had solid writing, included in the limited smut there was so I think you could manage.


But hey, people could always do fanfics if you'd be OK with that.

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Happy Sunday Funday Bsgbsm!

Thank you for loving the game as much as you do! But mainly, thank you for the amazing critique/ideas for the game. I really LOVE, for example, the ideas for new and expanded endings and storylines. Particularly the one you suggested where you can get Jon to betray the others. He was already pretty close anyways, if not for the influence and his loyalty to John. I can totally see that being a 9th ending or outcome. =)

That said, you're super insightful. Would you be willing to perhaps test/playthrough future titles and provide similar feedback? I have a short list of really trusted playthrough-ers, but I'd love to add you to the list . If that interests you, let me know! soulsoftea@gmail.com

PS. I also like the idea of adding (new)route updates and improvements, after the game has shipped! Next time, a good idea, would be to add that to the schedule so it's accounted for and hopefully in scope.

Ooh I love this. Especially the idea of a Chuck ending. Chuck is a side character, but I did really end up liking him alot as I was devving the game. 

In hindsight, our surfer 80's pornstache husbando should have an ending of his own. But if so, I'd def want to elevate him more to a main character and give him more scenes and chances to get to know him/hang out.