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Just one more report for this version of the game.  Going over the skills, there are description issues.

r3.00 SKILLS

Shield Bash (H) "Attack using shield, causing lower damage, but greatly lowers Attack and may apply "Stun" for 2 turns."    The problem with this one is "greatly lowers Attack", as it doesn't specify if it is the enemy or Trixie who gets the debuff.  Probably the enemy considering the context?

Valkyrie Spirit (T):  "Increases own Attack, Magic, and Defense, for 3 turns if you suffer any debuff in 6 turns."  The purpose of this skill isn't clear.  My first guess is that Trixie enjoys the standard Valkyrie Spirit buff upon casting, and if an enemy removes that bonus, your buff comes back on the spot?

Hero's Recovery (T):  "Heals user by 30% of Max HP, with a bonus based on Magic, if an enemy enemy reduces your HP to 0 in 3 turns."  The function isn't apparent.  Probably an auto-revive ability?  Also bit of an run-on sentence.  I recommend replacing the comma in "Magic," into a period as "Magic."

Vengeful Strike (E):  The text for "at the en" cuts off at the border.  Seems to also affect the period at the end of the skill description.

Masochism Strike:  "Becomes invulnerable for 1 turn.  At the end, attacks with extra damage based on damage that would be taken."   Two rewritten descriptions are below.  The sticking point is whether the damage is split between the enemies who dealt it, or maybe all of them take the combined total?

"Become invulnerable for 1 turn.  Received damage is combined and reflected on all enemies at end of turn."

"Become invulnerable for 1 turn.  At the end, return damage to each enemy that dealt it."

/r3.00 SKILLS

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