I like the game, the theme's simplicity works in it's favour, and I was curious to see where the story would go. I have a couple criticisms. I found that sometimes you will hit an invisible wall while jumping, causing you to fall and have to restart. Also, at the very start of the game, I think it should be a little clearer that your movement to the right is having any effect, as I was confused at first, thinking I was in a completely empty plane or not moving at all. Also, the AI occasionally uses broken English, although I'm not sure if this was intentional or not. I know I've listed up loads of criticism, but don't get the wrong idea, I enjoyed playing this charming little game! I hope you continue the story soon!
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Thank you for this feedback :D
About the movement, I tried to give the player the feedback of moving using the camera ( when the player stops, the camera stops after 0.3 sec)
And about the lines of the AI, I know in some parts english is kinda broken, but it's because my natal language isn't english (I can't provide a 100% accuracy in speaking and writing ).
Thank you so much again, and have a wonderful day :P