Interesting concept and theme, although it definitely feels like the game would have benefitted from some more time. I got stuck in between the jumps a couple of times at the beginning. They were not wide enough for my character to fall through. The way the dialogue is displayed is barely noticeable. Basically, I like the game, but polishing it would definitely be a huge improvement!
I also see this is your first jam so great start! I'm sure the next game will be even better! Good job!