I love it!! <3 It's really sweet and I love the writing style. I don't know how to write and I just end up writing too realistic dialogs. But this is why it's fun!
I love the colors, the atmosphere, the duration of the game, the mini-games... Great job!
I got confused when people were asking me to bring things, and I already had them, and I didn't know there was an inventory.
There is one empty slot at the end of the game, maybe I missed something. :(