I loved your art style and the kind of aspect ratio you chose. It just felt like a story being told to me. Some music and sound would have made it even better. If you feel like adding some flair, please check 2D Bloom from Brackeys. It's a great addition. This was a really great game for your first game jam. I am still struggling to add dialogue to my game. Thanks for this game!
Please consider playing and rating my game as well. Thanks!! Cheers!!!