The concepts really cool! And the writing is great, even if there are a few grammatical errors. Although, I don't like that the platforms spawn right as you hit them, so there was a couple of times where I missed the jump or ran off the platform because I didn't know where it was, then I had to restart the whole sequence of platforms. But overall, I really liked it!
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Ok, there's a few scattered through the game, the earliest ones I picked up on are:
- "I'll explain to you late" should be later
- "People said I was too powerful for the humanity" there shouldn't be a the
- "Ups" instead of Oops
There was a few more, but they were hard to record because the text doesn't stay on screen. They're only minor errors really, just something I noticed when I played through it the first time