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I like the cute graphics, the simple premise, the story is fun, and the objective is simple yet challenging. A couple of things that made the experience a little hard for me were:

  • Bouncy text at the beginning is too much and makes it hard to read.  I'm not a person with reading disability but even I was struggling to follow along. I would remove that completely and only make it move maybe when I hit continue
  • The trash graphics (paper, marker) blended way too much with the backdrop making me accidentally pick up without even knowing it. I would either add a hard white line border around the pickups or reduce the brighter of the backdrop to make the foreground stand up more. 

Finally, I prefer using space over up arrow as it gives me more control personally, so maybe giving the option be a good idea. Still, I think you made a cute, very  vibrant game :D