Normally, Im not entirely big on commenting on this sorta stuff, but this story hit me pretty hard, and made me rethink some stuff.
Firstly, I really enjoyed this story, I have to say my favorite part were the flashbacks. Naturally, I went straight in to help Bella, and figure out exactly why she hated me so much. Honestly, she was the main focus point of my playthrough. I can't say for sure, but I feel like Bella's story is the most complicated and most interesting of all. The side characters are fairly interesting with Riley being pretty much my favorite of them where the side characters are concerned. Obviously, James was my bro, and when I got to the end, I needed to keep my homie close.
But...what got me most of the concept of censorship in the form it takes place in this story. It's...a very scary thought. And while in this society we live in now, incestual relationships are surely frowned on I do constantly rethink about how back during the times of kings, and princesses it was much less taboo. And this story made me come to a more solid state of mind not to be judging of character if I were ever to know of someone in such a relationship.
I do have a few critiques, nothing major. Some of the positions were...odd lol I laughed out loud when I saw a arm straight and rigid during an oral scene, and sometimes the expressions seemed a little too...much.
Outside of all that, this story was great, and I wished I could have skipped more of the scenes just so I could get back in the story. Great job! Excellent writing!