I love your initial sketches! This is the slime queen for my current adventure ( so far), and a small snipper of the finished script:
You hesitantly approach the slime queen and reach a hand out, cupping her breast gently. The appendage is warm with a surprising weight.
SQ: So gentle, but I think I need a bit more, don’t you?
She puts her hands on yours and gives it a little squeeze.
SQ: Touch me darling <3
it'll have a branching story and I hope people will like it!