This one is really good, kinda surprised it hasn't been played that much, it has potential, the pixel art and the music is really good and I think the concept, in general, is good.
The big problem I can find is the duration is literally like 5-10 mins long, very obvious a lot of stuff needed to be cut at the last moment, I'm pretty sure this one could become one of the best ones with a little more of extra time.