I enjoyed the story!
Here is my feedback:
What do I like the most?
- The story.
- The SFX.
What didn't I like the most?
- Every text that shows up you have to click a new button to continue, which they are a lot and random. (Example: Number 1 shows and then number 8)
To fix/ bugs:
- The text on full screen is hard to read. (Main menu's text isn't blurred)
Suggestions:
- Maybe, add music.
- Possibly, bump down the buttons to 1-3 buttons. If you chose three buttons and the keys are numbers, change the buttons gradually on every text that shows. One then two then three and then one, etc.