I had a lot of fun with it! I love stories with interesting creatures and cultures clashing together, and reading the interactions between your characters was a lot of fun! I like how different the characters are from each other - they're all very distinctive and unique and will no doubt create some very interesting conversations with each other haha.
I hope you don't mind, but I have few questions too!
Where’s the best place to check for updates?
How’s the production going so far?
How do you pronounce all their names?
-Anything unclear that you wish had been better explained or would expect to be explained as the story goes along?
Not really. There’s obviously a kind of mystery going on, but I’m sure that’ll be revealed eventually.
-What expectations do you have based on the premise, description, and demo?
Hmm currently its giving off this awesome cross country/ocean trip with four strangers from wildly different places haha. I love characters that are different species and have unique cultures!
-Do you like Makani? Is she a protagonist you're willing to root for?
I like her. She’s responsible and thoughtful, but I think her flaws are especially interesting in that she’s also reckless and fiercely independent (which can also be good things in my book, just maybe not when taken to the extreme).
-Got a favorite character?
Vane and Groriu are my current favourites. Loremna'tat as a species seems like the most interesting (I love deep sea creatures haha, plus the whole matriarchal thing going on is super cool) and I've always had a soft spot for dudes with a bit of attitude lol. His perceptive side is unexpected but extremely welcome! Vane reminds me of a princess but I think that’s cool! He’s obviously intelligent, if a bit pessimistic haha. I'd love to find out more about his family and species!
Kameckt's enthusiasm is endearing but he’s just a bit too pushy for my taste. But I'm willing to give him a chance! I think he could be a good friend to have if he ever starts considering other people’s feelings before charging in lol.
I love how all the characters have flaws with strengths that balance them out. They’re an interesting cast that I'd love to spend more time with!
-Would you want to play through the rest of the story?
Yes yes yes!
-Anything that just needs fixing?
Some sentences read a bit awkwardly but it doesn’t take away from the enjoyment of the vn. You’re doing great!