I also read the latest build:
I would love to be casually offered a million dollars.
The moment alone with Tyson was very sweet. I like the tension you are building between their relationship, I'm excited to see where that leads.
Nothing really struck out that made me feel the need to put my critic glasses on.
Well I suppose that's all I had to say! Thanks for the interesting conversation. If you ever want a brutally honest unbiased opinion about something let me know!