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Hey, just finished Chapter 3 Part 1, and loved it! 

Small critique: Darci's insults could stand to be a bit more succinct. When she has longer explanations for what/why she said something, it takes away a bit of the punch.

Also, I tried to check out your Patreon from the image on this page, and found that both images actually link to your Discord group. I found it easily with a quick google search though!

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Sorry about the Patreon image, I fixed it.
I'm glad you loved Ripples, and I agree with what you said about Darci, I must have had a reason for explaining more, but I will take what you said into consideration in the future.
Thanks