Hello dear sir, i also gave it a try and there are a lot of issues, im not here to say anything bad but im going to just lay them out for you.
>Charachter movement is very bad, you should create an empty scene and work on the movement till you are satisfied, also remove the jump.
>You have to use spatial 3d for you sounds, as you can see from the video a lot of sounds just start and stop (the radio and television
>Missing options menu, this is really important because not every mouse speed is your mouse speed, for me the mouse speed was horrible and also missing vsync causes huge issues with high refresh rate monitors, gpu ventilators go crazy on this.
>Missin occulusion culling, the game should run 240fps for me but if thats missing its not going to happen
>Effects are too heavy, with these you must be careful.
>Story is not that interesting, even with such a twist it was more of cringe at the end.
I hope my feedback allows you to take a second look on these issues and make it better, overall models are good looking, but when i look outside its not that beutiful, as a starting developer create a empty scene and start working on the character movement, gameplay first then visuals.