Thank you so much for the feedback! This is my first time writing a story and I didn't go to school for this type of thing, so it means a lot :)
One of the biggest complaints I've seen people having for H games is that the main character is unrelatable. Maybe he's rapey, a dick, a super alpha, a super beta, etc etc. So I decided to go to the route of games like Legend of Zelda and Half Life where the main character is a self insert. In fact in most of the beginning of the game, he's mostly mute but as the story went on he started to have much more of a voice. But still to this day, I don't see MC as the actual main character, he's just the player. The 8 women in the hotel are the protagonists of their own stories and the player character is a supportive vehicle for their narratives.
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Runey42, I'd like to ask you a question ....Do you intend to keep this game up indefinitely, or is there actually going to be a middle and eventually and end to the game (story) before you move on to other games or interests? Just wondering.
I could see after an extended amount of play that even the most avid player would get tired or move on to something else so I was curious of your end goal.
Thanks