Day 10 - Working on text and other room mechanics.
Room 3 finished! 5 more to go.
Can you please help to check if this English text is correct?
A Lonely Girl
Once upon a time there was a girl that felt very lonely.
She cried, cried and cried...
She cried so much that she made a river...
...and the river has grown so much that it turned in to a sea...
The other boys and girls saw that she was very sad.
Then, they played, talked and shared their lunch with her...
The girl was very happy. When laughing, instead of tears, suns were coming out of her...
...turning the tears in to a rainbow of all colors...
... you can also make the rainbows shine if you see someone sad...