I am a huge scifi fan and this is good, the opening scene reminded me a bit to much about scenes from Battlestar Galactica and the pilots from the Cylon ships, and i was a bit worried this would just take ideas from a host of scifi movies, games and books and mix them.
But very soon the storytelling took off and became very original, some of the more original scifi i have seen and read. Excellent stuff and i cant wait for the next part. This has serious potential turning into good sexy space opera and i sincerely hope we will get many, many more chapters and you manage to stay original.
Excellent work, good graphics and please keep this level of quality up.