Ok, this one is definitely my favorite game so far.
I tried to immerse the player in my game too, but differently. And oh boy you sir did it good!
The story is so cute, and well written. As a french, learning the name of the "flesh-being" gives a whole new meaning to the story. Good depth, good length... congrats!
The art is on top too. And the music is honey for ears, honestly.
I would make much more compliments but I also want to search for something I think could be thought twice:
- Why not making a pause panel / a way to go back to menu or something? It has the feeling of being a one shot, and has the good length to be like that but I feel you could add something still with that.
- When you do an error and lose with either character, it is like nothing happen. Maybe you could do a rewind effect or a teleport, to feel like nothing happened or they were saved last second?
I am being nit-picky, but I wanted to give you something to think about in the middle of all my congratulations....
Amazing job !! :)