This was surprisingly good! I loved the weird storytelling/poetic elements and the different quirks. I just wish it was longer. Some notes:
- The text in the first few rooms was so far to the left that I couldn't read it
- The post-processing was a bit excessive, especially in the heaven level
- I loved the atmospheric music in the 'scary' part
- The cutscene at the end felt completely out of place for me
- Just add more levels!!