There is some potential here, but I gotta say Events sure feel rushed. You barely get to decide anything, but get pushed around by everyone.
Not sure about the timeline, but it feels I've been at the capital for a week, not done anything but flirt with Widows and Princesses, including getting into their pants. I mean I was very entertained by the famous General trying to keep up with everything that jumps at him, but maybe slow down a bit?
*spoiler*
And you lost me on Valentina wanting to have sex, when her sister just disappeared and might be kidnapped or dead. That point in time, the chief of security should maybe do his Job? xD