Nice story! I think this has a potential to so somewhere! Maybe perhaps a love affair or hot person comes in the main character is attracted to??
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Thank! I've been working on a "full release" version that will include more characters. Quill definitely has a pre-existing relationship with Florbet at the bar. I'm glad it still read well even for people who are unfamiliar with the characters already!
(You might want to check out Cherry Kisses, by eevee, who runs these jams. Florbet and Quill both show up as customers!)