This isn't terrible, but it isn't quite unique. The story is fairly predictable, the pacing let's you predict the jumpscares, and there is far too much of 'telling' not 'showing'. I think this is a good start into making games of this genre, but don't be afraid to break the mold! Experiment. Try different ideas out! Don't be afraid to get bizarre. The stranger, the better. Looking forward to seeing what else you guys make!