This feels like one half of a game. Maybe a third. There's all this misery, and nothing was done with it. At the end it feels like the characters say "Well, those were some screwed up stories. Anyways..."
The artwork is quite nice, and the scenario for the framing story seems intriguing. But it feels incomplete, and frustrating. It feels like it's just episode one, or a proof-of-concept demo. If it is, then I hope you eventually set up a fundraiser or something to get the rest of this game made, and good luck with it.