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Thank you for playing and for your feedback. I wrote this novel mostly to see how well I do at all the steps to create a finished project, and where I need to get better, so I appreciate honest criticism. Writing dialogue and drawing characters were the hardest parts, so I will work on those for my next project.

With Melancholica, I basically started writing from the end, and wrote the scenes before to fit that. Which works well for mystery, but for slice of life, it is important to make the dialogue flow naturally. As a reader, I thought those scenes are mostly there to fill time between events, but actually they are just as hard to write as plot heavy scenes, if not more so.

So for my next big project, I'm trying my best to fix those issues. I hope I can show my progress here next year or so.

I can't say it was bad though, it just gave me a weird vibe. Like I really believed at some point that both protagonists were the same person and having a brain meltdown ! 

The drawing was cute also ~

I'm following what you do anyway - eager to see more ! :)