This is really cool!
A couple questions/comments
Maleficence of the wastes p says pupils become golden like a wolf. Do you mean irises?
For the goat legs maleficence, goat legs aren't precisely backwards from human legs. The equivalent of the knee is just really high up and the hocks (apparent backward knee) is really the heel. It seems even better to describe it this way, but idk if you want to.
For mlfcnce of the weird 2, what do you mean by 'idols of jungian manifestation?'
For the most part, those are just good edits instead of questions. Thanks!
For "idols of Jungian manifestations," I would probably describe it like this as a GM:
"Have you ever seen those stone age Venus statues? OK, picture those--and hand prints, and phalluses, and crude statues of aurochs, and eyes--being built by invisible hands out of the stuff that's in the room. So, little pebbles, and the chest you broke earlier, and the potsherds I described--they're all being assembled by invisible hands into these abstract, cave man like images. What do you do?"
