From day 10 onwards the writing style shifts to one that is melodramatic and monologue-heavy. Can't say I enjoyed it as much as the plot driven days of 1-9. There needs to be action between moments of contemplation and those moments are best when the mc is interacting with other characters. Monologues are best kept succinct otherwise they tend to feel like they drone on and on. It's best to monologue what's absolutely necessary and leave much of the meaning to be understood through the subtext.