So I played the Demo and it was awesome.
Really like the graphics and the atmospere and the story seems interesting.
Great Praise to you, how you how you lead the player through the levels, I know everytime where I have to go.
Also what I really like is the thing with the voice in the head, remembers me to Hellblade: Senuas Sacrafice, a game what I really recommend to you for inspiration if you didn't already played it.
Some notes as a tipp for you what I did while i played the game:
- Importand: create some Ingame Menu, where the player has the possiability to check the controls and quit the game.
- Interactable objects need to be highlighted more.
- In that case of third person perspective, in which the camera is so close to the figure, I whould recommend you to place the figur not in the middle, more left- or rightsided, for example like in God of War (2018), Resident Evil 2/3 Remake and/or Hellblade (again)
So I hope my tips can help you a little bit, and I will wait for the finished game, because what I saw right now is awesome and can't wait to see more.
Greeting ;-)