Thank you for the reply.
I definitely enjoyed how the characters grew and even felt things for Maria as her hard life has lead her to believe no one wants her for more than a play thing. In such I spend several weeks not using her sexually and only boosting her Affection especially after the break up part.
I know these are you characters so I'm not going to disagree about what they would do so Ashley may not tell Autumn after her growth, but her pride for having such a nice partner gives me the feeling she would bring the subject up, probably not in a threatening way but would bring it up. And if the MC wants to actually be the good person he should tell Autumn sooner than later. Not knowing the full legal aspects of your world I can't say if marriage to multiple people is okay, but from the marriage game makes me believe it can only be one and that would definitely make a huge contribution to weather Autumn would be okay joining such a large Poly relationship.
Honestly go hard on the story as much as you need, just the sexual sections shouldn't have so much serious story beforehand, makes it hard to enjoy it and just throws the mood. Like sex with the elven queen should have been quite hot but having spent so much time in depressing situation made it not enjoyable (also I was expecting the others to use that time to make their move to attack her rather than actually have fun).
I will have to get back to you on the BDSM aspects as the story getting completed is definitely something more important.
Does Maria actually work at the Bar during the normal times of the day? I only saw her there during events.