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Pros and cons are down below)

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Advantages:

1. The story is mystical and interesting. It has some Fran Bow vibes in a sense that it makes you wonder whether the thing that's happening is really happening or it's all in her head kind of story. Very cool! I especially liked the open ending)

2. The art style is very cool! I absolutely loved how you can say that the girl is paranoid by looking at her. The little details in the background that hint at the story are also a very nice touch! I loved that!

3. The pacing is great! I feel like even though the game starts pretty slow but it has some mystery to it right off the bat and it hooks the player. Very cool!

Disadvantages:

1. I'd like to see more horror elements. The game spooked me only once and then reused the same trick over and over. It added to the ambiance a bit but overall I feel like there should have been something different. I mean the whole game it's been so smart at creating tension and predicting players' questions and then a lot of kind of cheap lil spooks. I just know you can do so much better at the whole basement part!

2. Lack of background music. That's a huge one. Just put non-intrusive creepy background music that's kind of always at the back of your mind but not really noticeable. I had to pick one track myself and I think the game benefited a lot from that but I'm (obviously) biased!

Overall:

That was amazing! I absolutely loved the game! I rate it 5 paranoid girls / 5! Yet, I'm sure you could still polish the game a bit more to make it perfect.

Hope my feedback was useful!