It looks like this game has a really nice direction aesthetic and story-wise, but for the most part, it just seems unfinished and untested. Audio is a bit finicky in the beginning, the player frequently goes underneath objects in the scene, and it's very unclear as to what you're supposed to do. I've played the game twice, getting the same result each time where, after getting caught by the father for leaving the room when you're supposed to read a book for 6 hours, I get stuck in the next with no known way of getting out.
It just looks like this game needs more time to develop, and given more time, it can be pretty cool.
If you're interested and have the time to do so, feel free to check out our jam game, Black Blizzard: https://itch.io/jam/screamortality/rate/978095