i am absolutely biased in reviewing this, because this is EXACTLY the kind of horror writing that i adore. the surreality, the slow realization of what was actually going on... it's fantastic how you were able to create such a chilling and unsettling experience in such a short time! not to mention how well you tied the assets that you created in with the theme and central plot. i really enjoyed this piece and i can't wait to see more from you!!
also side note, but i felt really bad for AnGel the whole time. : ( she was just doing her job... i hope she found some form of comfort in the end like i did, if it's possible for her to.