First off, i love this game wholistically. The opening title theme is gorgeous (it sounds like Sufjan Stevens scored your vn), good sound design, love the art style, love the character design, love the more diverse LGBT+ rep (finding anything other than gay men in fvns is rare).
Secondly, noticed a few typos/small grammar things that I wanted you to be aware of. I'll put the fixes below:
Line 49: "I- if I check my phone to see if it was him, will you let me sleep?"
Line 115: "Well I didn’t feel the need to, since I thought his best friend would have already told him."
Line 130: "*Sigh* Yeah, you’re right, I’ll tell him tonight... and stop saying I'm in love with him- it's weird."
Line 133: "Denial doesn't suit you well, Wallace."
Line 165: "Now c'mon, let’s figure out what we should wear to the party."
Line 167: "Besides, you need a wingman."
Line 187: between "don't know" and "it's complicated", I'd suggest some sort of punctuation depending on how you want the line to be read (... - ; , etc)
Line 190: "Trust me, I get it."
Line 191: "Yeah, thank you,"
Line 192: "Well, ok then."
Line 203: "Hmmmmm, I’ll allow it.
Line 204: "Oooo, my favorite!"
Line 208: "After about an hour of Jay tearing me to shreds about my taste in clothing, we ended up having to go to the mall."
Line 211: "But that can wait for tomorrow, because before we knew it, it was time to leave for the party."