Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here (the game is the 2d there)) likes and subs are highly appreciated!!:
Advantages:1. The story is geat! I felt intrigued and curious, got a bit spooked as well) Great job!
2. The monster design is very very cool! I love that stuff! I googled the artist you mentioned and saw in what way you got inspired by their monsters but still, it's fascinating what you created, I want to see more of it!
3. I loved the little animations you did! They add so much to the ambiance!
Disadvantages:
1. It felt a bit weird to see the dude under the stairs. They only had questions so they didn't actually see anything yet but still, they chose a very weird spot to freak out about their suspicions. I just felt that something was off about this moment...
2. So short! I want to see more of that so much!
Overall:
Definitely 5/5 star rating. I hope that this will become a bigger project or you'll make more similar stories! It was such a cool experience! I'm impressed!
Hope my feedback was useful!