I really liked the writing, and I was sad when the game ended because I wanted to play more and see where the story was going. Good job, looking forward to play the rest of it! Only critique I have is the maps; Collisions were a bit odd sometimes and maps didn't really add that much to the game, so you could just go full-blown visual-novel and have only static images as background. But good job and good luck with IGMC! :)