This was interesting! The narrative really makes you think and I like the choice of low poly assets. I think it could have served you better if you had either done a terrain, surrounded the edges of the park plane with trees, or added a fog effect so you didn't have such a stark drop off between the world and the skybox.
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Thank you for your comment! You're right it would surely be better to do something better about the edges of this mini world... I just added that cloud-like particle effect that was prbably the fastest thing to do. It's only my second 3D game and I'm still learning... Next time I'll try something nicer!