I liked this a lot. I'm not sure I fully understood what was going on, but I don't think understanding is the point. The only criticisms I could give is that there were some grammatical errors, which might have been purposely in context/in character, and that the download size was pretty big for this kind of game. Maybe due to some uncompressed images and/or audio? But like I said, I thought this was v good.
I see, well depending on what text you read some errors might have been on purpose and others not. English is not my main langauge so sorry for any actual errors, I try my best to fix them. Yeah the project size is huge, I've tried my best to compress it as much as possible, how ever I used large files without realising it so that's an issue.