Ok, I really dont know how to start this review.
First of all, sorry for my bad english.
What a game! That soundtrack, art and story are amazing.
I can feel the love you guys put with your hearts in this game, in every note of the music, in every detail of the art and in the whole story.
Playing this game make me remember an amazing old adventure game called Gabriel Knight, don't know if you guys played, but it's a very similar, it has amazing music, art and this mistery context that glue all together.
I dont' know if you guys intend to keep working in this game, don't get me wrong, I loved the game and didn't find anything to critice, all I want is to give some new ideas to maybe help you evolve the game:
I think this game would be perfect for a more point-and-click adventure style, so you guys would worry less with sprite animations and tilesets and have more time to draw deeper static scenarios, like when Edwin and Nora was on the upper floor on that house and they were talking about the crime evidences, that moment would be perfect for using like a magnify and let the player spot all evidences.
When Edwin need to talk with another npc, using options to let the player ask the questions and interrogate would make that moment more immersive to the player.
Putting voices on the more important dialogs would make the game go to the next level.
Ok, sorry, I did really stayed a "little" excited with my suggestions, I know you guys had only one month and you guys really have did a amazing job.
Thanks for creating such a good game, you guys really deserve my vote.