First of all, please fix all the spelling issue, even if "tyr again" and "do you still there" is funny, it doesn't belong here x) The music is nice, it creates an atmosphere, could have been improved with better visuals tho. The dying sfw is horrible, it has too much high frequencies it hurts. Also there is a click each time the delay effect plays, it's annoying. Beside that good start, could be improved but it has some good ideas :)