Typos, typos, typos! I suppose that given the time constraints of contest game design something had to give
"...plus it (the dream realm) is filled with many dangerous places created from the...
darker dreams of mankind..." As a full explanation for every single danger in the dream realm this actually works pretty well. You should have this as a central theme and even connect some of the random dream places to specific organizations or individuals within this setting~
Getting someone to edit the script for me would have benefited things greatly. I can use the time frame as an excuse all I want, but it's better to have a 2nd set of eyes go over your work anyways. Still no editor on the update patch I just posted I'm afraid, but from this point forward I'm going to have an editor for all future releases.
And yes, one of the things I'm actually hoping to do as I continue the story is have the dream realm and 'real world' (In quotes since it's still the game's world) be able to affect each other in certain ways. Learning about new things and meeting new people during the day will open new missions and destinations to travel to at night, and on the other hand your actions in certain dreams might change the course of events in 'reality' by influencing people.
