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Zilvan3 years ago(+3)

Okay, i am gonna be really honest here.

The game is really good with a decent story ^^

The art is also pleasing :)

But...

I wish you offer us more option and maybe you could use variable more.

Also i really wish we could choose who get to have our v card rather than the uncle forcing us. Afterall it should be okay since in the beginning of chapter 4 we already resolved our determination.

You should let us to be able to focus on only 1 person or be as poly/free as possible. I personally wish to only focus on the brother and give my all to him :D

So despite the hotness of the situation with the uncle, its really making me feel displeasure. Hope you can see my advice and it can be of some help :)

Pss1303 years ago(+1)

Yeah, I agree with you. I wish I could choose who I interact with and not have to do anything with who I don't want to.

AshThick3 years ago (2 edits) (+4)(-1)

You have to take in consideration this is literally my first ever visual novel, I write create and code everything by myself, and have been doing this for almost every day since release when the game looked like text over a plain white screen, if you look at the game now it's so much more pleasant to look at than before and I learned those things after posting v0.1.1 , I'm still learning new ways to code a prettier looking visual novel and how to branch a story , I'm not very experienced in multiple path stories it is very complicated and take a lot of time to write and since I wanted to give people more content often I chose to share single path stories instead of making you wait a long time before I update the game, but rest assured I do consider giving the player more choices but it will come with time please be patient with me because so far this project has been taking a lot of my time. hopefully one day if I ever make a patreon I will have funds to hire people to proofread/cowrite with me, for now it's just me alone having a lot of fun creating something for you guys to enjoy hopefully <3

Zilvan3 years ago(+1)

Of course will be sticking around with ur game ^^

It is really enjoyable and i particularly (as i said earlier) like the brother personality so much.

Hope you will be able to improve your game to perfection :)

(Also despite me saying you should do this and that, i will be that one hypocrite that will tell you that you shouldn't follow other advice if it doesn't suit you otherwise you will eventually be bored because you will gradually see the game isn't like what you initially want it to be if you keep trying to meet all the expectation. Just write and do what you enjoy with your game, this game is yours afterall :D)

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